Copywriting

Incompetent copywriter or copywriter with a vendetta?

Just got this off Mr Brown’s site. It was originally posted on Adrants. The ad is for Imedeen’s skin care pills.

i swallow

In case you can’t read the text:

“My secret to beautiful skin? I swallow.”

So now, we know.

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6 Responses to “Copywriting”


  1. 1 Adrian F

    Obviously the advertising company didn\’t really think hard enough. Swallow? How in the world would I know it\’s Imeedeen pills?

  2. 2 Nirmala

    It HAS to be intentional. I refuse to believe that such subversively naughty copy could be a *lucky* accident. Also, maybe not a vendetta, but Imedeen consciously going for controversial?? Either way, I love it.

  3. 3 acroamatic
    @Mala: Don’t tell me you’re behind this!
  4. 4 Nirmala

    I wish I could credit… but no. :P

  5. 5 Nirmala

    I wish I could TAKE credit… but no. :P

    And sigh, the copywriter mucks up her sentences.

  6. 6 acroamatic
    I shall leave your post as damning evidence. :P
    We all make mistakes, lah.

    Especiallywhenwetypefastlikehowsomeofusspeak.

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